What do you think of this short movie script? i can change the names of the characters?

Billy- (phones j)



Joel- (picks up phone) hello



Billy- hey man it鈥檚 billy



Joel- yeah I know



Billy- (laughs) ok so whats up?



Joel- nothing much you?



Billy 鈥?nothing



Joel- cool



Billy- you want to sleep over?



Joel- sure when should I be over?



Billy 鈥?in an hour



Joel- ok



Joel- (hangs up)



Billy- (hangs up)



Billy- mom joel鈥檚 sleeping over ok!!!



Mom- ok



An hour later



Joel- (knocks on door)



Billy-(answers door) hey man come on in



Joel- hi (walks in)



Billy- guess what movie鈥檚 I rented



Joel- do I wanna know?



Billy- I got the sixth sense, the unborn, and I downloaded every episode of happy tree friends



Joel- why did you do that man you know I hate horror movies



Billy- have you ever seen one



Joel- no and I don鈥檛 plan on it



Billy- well you have to watch one or your not sleeping over



Joel- fine I鈥檒l watch one



Billy- what one



Joel- the sixth sense that one doesn鈥檛 sound to bad



Billy- sweet I love that movie



Joel- k let鈥檚 get it set up



Billy- not yet it鈥檚 still light out



Joel- what it has to be dark?



Billy- what do you want to do now then



Joel- let鈥檚 go swimming



Billy- yeah



2 hours later



billy- that was a good swim



joel- yeah it would have been better if your mom would have let us go in the water though



billy- she鈥檚 a little overprotective so what



joel- yeah yeah



mom- I鈥檓 going out for dinner with joel鈥檚 mom I鈥檒l be back quite late



billy- ok mom



billy- let鈥檚 go get the movie set up



joel- fine



billy-(setting up the movie)



joel-( looking for another movie to watch quickly)



billy- k it鈥檚 ready



joel- why don鈥檛 we watch borat instead



billy- no that movie sucks



joel- have you seen it



billy- no and I don鈥檛 plan on it



joel- fine



billy and joel- (sit down and start watching the movie)



1 hours later



joel- (hugging a pillow) don鈥檛 go back in the tent!!! (screams and runs out room into billy鈥檚 parents room)(and there is a man with a bag mask on and duct tape in his hand)



stranger- hello joel (zoom in on strangers face then scene ends





20 minutes later



billy- JOEL!! JOEL!!!(gets up to go look for joel)(enters his parents room and finds him under the bed with tape over his mouth)



joel- screaming



billy-(rips the tape off his mouth) who did this to you?



Joel- (talking really fast) this guy put the tape on my mouth then disappeared



Billy- slow down what did this guy look like?



Joel- I don鈥檛 know he was wearing a mask



Billy - what kind of mask?



Joel- he was wearing a bag over his head with鈥?(terrified look on his face)



Stranger-(standing behind billy)



Billy- (talking to joel) what? (turns around) who are you?





Stranger- think about it ( then grabs a pillow pushes it to his face and suffocates billy)



Joel- why are you doing this



Stranger-you鈥檙e next ( disappears)



Joel- (tries to wake up billy but cant then gets a phone and dials 911)



Stranger- (picks up phone) the police cant鈥檛 do anything



Joel- (hangs up phone) and runs to computer and types in how to kill a ghost ( looks to right and see鈥檚 stranger walking towards him with a fire extinguisher in his right hand)



Stranger- you really think I鈥檓 a ghost



Joel- why are you doing this?



Stranger- ( puts hat on joel and hits him over the head with the fire extinguisher) because your home (walks out apt door down hall)



The next morning



(Billy鈥檚 mom walk through door)



mom- (walks through into her room and see鈥檚 billy lying there on the bed with the pillow over his head)(wakes up billy)



billy- MOM!



mom- what?



billy- nothing. Where鈥檚 joel!



Mom and billy- (walk through to where joel is)



Billy- joel wake up. Wake up!



Joel- what? Oww my head



Billy- what happened to you



Joel- he hit me over the head with a fire extinguisher



Mom 鈥?what!!?? Who?



Billy -the stranger



Joel- but whats his name?



Billy- I don鈥檛 know but I鈥檓 scared he鈥檚 not finished with us



Joel- what makes you think that?



Billy- were still alive



Joel- that is true



Billy- well let鈥檚 just hope he doesn鈥檛



That night



Billy- (sleeping on the bed)



Joel -(sleeping on the floor)



Billy- rolls of bed and falls on joel



Bill and joel- (scream and get up)



Stranger- ( standing in front of them with a guitar in his left hand)(walks towards the boys) rock on (hits joel over the head with guitar)



Billy- please stop



Stranger 鈥搘hy ?



Billy- I鈥檓 to young to die



Stranger 鈥?I鈥檓 not going to kill you I鈥檓 gonna torture you until you wish you were dead.



Billy- then what?



Stranger- you鈥檒l see (hit鈥檚 him over the head with guitar)



Next morning



Mom- (yells from kitchen) wakie wakie boys I made pancakes



Billy- mom?



Joel- billy鈥檚 mom?



Joel- (tries to sit up) ooowwwww



Billy- dude what happened to us?



Joel- I don鈥檛 know but please don鈥檛 tell me my forehead is bleading (wiping blood off his ears)



Billy- uumm it鈥檚 not bleadi
What do you think of this short movie script? i can change the names of the characters?
It's terrible. Boring dialogue, story isn't compelling at all.